@awildyarngal, I am so glad you liked the book! It means everything to me to get nice notes. It has been a big step for me, to write and publish. It's not easy coming from a blue collar back ground. If you would, send me a note through my email, Hollisglassbooks@gmail.com, or reach out on IG @hollisglassbooks so I know how to get a hold of you.
Thank you again, Hollis Glass
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awildyarngal
Dec 09, 2019
I enjoyed book 1. Pacing and characterization were solid. You need a better proofreader. Let me know if I can help. I'm a retired college English teacher. I highlighted the errors (strait/straight, then/than, tense change, etc.
@awildyarngal, I am so glad you liked the book! It means everything to me to get nice notes. It has been a big step for me, to write and publish. It's not easy coming from a blue collar back ground. If you would, send me a note through my email, Hollisglassbooks@gmail.com, or reach out on IG @hollisglassbooks so I know how to get a hold of you.
Thank you again, Hollis Glass
I enjoyed book 1. Pacing and characterization were solid. You need a better proofreader. Let me know if I can help. I'm a retired college English teacher. I highlighted the errors (strait/straight, then/than, tense change, etc.